1st Cut Presentation Feedback

We presented our 1st cut presentation to the class and our teacher on the 25th of February as scheduled, however we had not finished filming all our scenes due to not being able to film for the reasons listed before. Despite this, we were still able to create a mood and effect with the scenes we had already shot, and our editing effects allowed this be continued as we used black and white effect, slowed down shots and sharpened some. We also started to add fade to black transitions. So far, we had 50 seconds worth of footage, which is the majority of the inside shots. We need to put these scenes in time with the music and shoot the rest of our scenes.
The feedback that our teacher gave us is as follows...











From this feedback, we are going to make improvements by using more transitions such as dissolves to make variations. Also, we are going to make sure our images fit in well with the lyrics when editing. When we shoot our next and final scenes, we want to make sure we get into the 32-40 marks, so Paige and I need to make sure our shots are steady, frame the shots well and interesting - maybe more creative, use appropriate material and props/customes, select our locations well, edit for meaning (so our lyrics fit in with images, and there is continuity) and vary our captions and other FX. Unfortunately we do not have the original 1st cut, as when we uploaded our 2nd lot of footage, the first cut got over wrote by new footage! So we had to upload everything again onto Adobe Premier and re-edit.