- a strong retro feel created through B/W an costume
- good variation in camera angles particurlarly the alternaion between high angle and low angle
- mise en scene in interior shots shows planning and fits style well
- effective use of close-ups and profile shots- these are challenging to flm and yours are steady and well framed
- the POV shots with actors performance to camera works well
- powerful last image of Jack at graveside
- very well paced editing matching the song
What could be improved:
- lip synching, it still isn't quite right at times have you got anything else to add over it?
- reverse movement shot on the bridge doesn't work
- grainy indoor shots some things are indistinct, can you get more definition?
- have you showcased all your skills e.g match on action, shot reverse shot...
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